author - "bravefire43 and kouen.ninja"
My friend, kouen.ninja, and I, are working together on a new story, with the working title of "Hidden Life." It's set in the 31st century, and it's about about a couple of girls, twins in fact: an abused slave named Lily Whitlow, and a troublemaking orphan named Jasmine Firetongue. In "Hidden Life," they learn about their kinship, their real parents, and a scary secret about themselves: they aren't completely human. Kouen.ninja and I would appreciate your positive criticism
My friend, kouen.ninja, and I, are working together on a new story, with the working title of "Hidden Life." It's set in the 31st century, and it's about about a couple of girls, twins in fact: an abused slave named Lily Whitlow, and a troublemaking orphan named Jasmine Firetongue. In "Hidden Life," they learn about their kinship, their real parents, and a scary secret about themselves: they aren't completely human. Kouen.ninja and I would appreciate your positive criticism