Evelyn was born with eyes the color of amethyst. Alex was born wihth eyes that never seemed to stay the same color. As Evelyn embarks on a journey to truly understand who and what she is, will she find her place among the people like her?
This is no fairytale. Alana is a teenage mermaid and her and her kind feed on human flesh. Everything is fine until her and her sisters go out to hunt. There is one prey that Alana can't sink her teeth into. That is a bad thing because it is against the law for a merhuman to fall in love with a human or they will die. Stuck between both worlds, Alana can't choose between the man she just met and who she is falling in love with or the world she ave been a part of her whole life. Either way, she
Gabriel was deemed unworthy by his own mother. How can he hope to find and accept his lifemate when he still feels imperfect.
A simple reminder that we all have day to day challenges we must overcome on this journey we call Life. May the knowledge that we are all together on this path bring peace to those who feel alone.
This is Example Before, after it has been edited professionally. Note the flow, tension, and shorter word count. Grammar, sentence structure and comma use are now correct.
Tonight is the night of the Blue Moon. The Blue Moon only comes every 4 years and it last a week. All the weres in the world will come together tonight and participate in games and challenges. To see who is the best and to try to find your mate. Will Kelly find her mate this year or will she have to wait and try to find her mate?
Libby Angel has the perfect life. Perfect parent's, perfect grades, and the perfect place on the dance team, captain. But, she doesn't want that. She doesn't want her life already planned out for her by her parent's. She wants to be free to make mistakes, or not get an a on a test. But her parent's would never approve. She's never drank, or partied, but they still aren't satisfied. What happens when she meets Ryan Castello, and ex gang member, who twists her life upside down? What about when
a modern day fairy tale from India, where arranged marriages are common.
Evelyn was born with eyes the color of amethyst. Alex was born wihth eyes that never seemed to stay the same color. As Evelyn embarks on a journey to truly understand who and what she is, will she find her place among the people like her?
This is no fairytale. Alana is a teenage mermaid and her and her kind feed on human flesh. Everything is fine until her and her sisters go out to hunt. There is one prey that Alana can't sink her teeth into. That is a bad thing because it is against the law for a merhuman to fall in love with a human or they will die. Stuck between both worlds, Alana can't choose between the man she just met and who she is falling in love with or the world she ave been a part of her whole life. Either way, she
Gabriel was deemed unworthy by his own mother. How can he hope to find and accept his lifemate when he still feels imperfect.
A simple reminder that we all have day to day challenges we must overcome on this journey we call Life. May the knowledge that we are all together on this path bring peace to those who feel alone.
This is Example Before, after it has been edited professionally. Note the flow, tension, and shorter word count. Grammar, sentence structure and comma use are now correct.
Tonight is the night of the Blue Moon. The Blue Moon only comes every 4 years and it last a week. All the weres in the world will come together tonight and participate in games and challenges. To see who is the best and to try to find your mate. Will Kelly find her mate this year or will she have to wait and try to find her mate?
Libby Angel has the perfect life. Perfect parent's, perfect grades, and the perfect place on the dance team, captain. But, she doesn't want that. She doesn't want her life already planned out for her by her parent's. She wants to be free to make mistakes, or not get an a on a test. But her parent's would never approve. She's never drank, or partied, but they still aren't satisfied. What happens when she meets Ryan Castello, and ex gang member, who twists her life upside down? What about when
a modern day fairy tale from India, where arranged marriages are common.