The Disappearance - Angel Ortiz (any book recommendations txt) 📗

     A 13 year old boy named Charlie was home alone in 153 Elm ave. Charlie was in his room watching T.V when he heard a big BOOM. He got up very slowly and coutiously. He walked to his room door and opened it to a little crack to see if anyone was coming up the stairs. Once he knew it was all clear he walked down stairs to look of what happen and noticed someone broke the door down. When he checked if somebody was outside he hears unparticular noise and suspects someone in the living room. After he suspects that someone is in the living room he quietly rushes upstairs to grab a bat. After he got a grip to the bat he went downstairs into the living room. Oncne he walks into the living room he notices two masked mens looking for something.  When one of the men turned around to look somewhere else he sees Charlie and pulls out a gun and says to his partner

"Hey look what we have here." The other guy turns around and takes a slight look at Charlie. One of the guys said to the other guy

"He might know for what we are looking for we should get him" when Charlie hears that he runs upstairs as fast as he can to his room and locks the door. The burglars followed him up there and noticed that he locked the door so they broke the door down and started to look for Charlie but they couldn't find him so they looked at the closet and noticed that the bat was on the bed so they checked the closet and found him. Once they found him he quickly screamed

"HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" to the top of his tiny lungs. They quickly tied him up and put tape on his mouth and then put a bag on his head and carried him off to there black Toyata Van.

     Charlie parents ended up coming home from there date in a salsa dancing place. When they pulled up through the driveway they ended up noticing that there front door was busted down. Charlies mom and dad look at each other and said

"CHARLIE"!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Slam!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the car door slams) they run up to the front door with caution and notice that the house  was a total mess like someone was looking for somebody although there was nobody in the house. So they look for Charlie every where in the house inch by inch, and side by side. But they couldn't find him anywhere. What the mom immediately does is grabs her phone and calls the police. When the police come, Officer Carder was a relative of Charlie so he came right away and asked the parents

"What the hell happened here and where the fuck is Charlie" he says in an scared and anxious voice.

"I don't know" says the mom in a crying voice. After Charlies mom stopped talking to Officer Carder he had to ask them both questions about what they have seen but they didn't have any useful information. For example they couldnt find any type of fingerprints, or blood. All they had was a busted down door. So they had to call Special Detectives to try to solve this disappearance. but even the special detectives couldnt figure out a thing.. They now needed to seek even more special help they had to call.... the FBI.

     While Charlies parents and his realative Officer Carder wait for the Speciaal Detectives to come they go back and look at the house again. They went to Charlies room to see if anything of his was broken or taken with the crooks. They noticed a note... BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!! The door shuts and the Charlie dad and Officer Carder jump back and look who slammed the door. Cautiously Charlies mom puts the note in her pocket and looks back very slowly. There was nobody there they look around the room and noticed there was somebody with a black jacket in the closet so Officer Carder quickly pulls out his gun and says

"PUT YOUR HANDS UP WHERE I CAN SEE THEM!!!!" The guy doesnt listen so Charlies dad went up to him and saw his face it was the Special Detective. When Charlies Dad touched the Special Detective the Detective looked at him very angrily and was like

"May i help you sir please take your hand of of me." Charlies dad was very uncoutious when he noticed that it was a Special Detective.

"Sorry Detective i thought you were a burglar.." said Charlies Dad.

"So Officer Carder have you asked neighbors if they seen anything suspicious or heard anything." ''No i havent asked any neighbors I had to see if my family was ok so i didnt have time to check."

''Officer Carder how can you not see if anyone has seen anything!!! That is your job to be investigating this case not to be lovey dovey with your family... You are on duty so get your ass downstairs and go ask the neighbors if they have  seen anything if you do not do that you will be FUCKING fired!!!!!''

'' Im sorry Detective but i cant do that my aunt needs me to confort her.. She needs all the confort that she can get.. Why cant you just tell theh FBI to ask the neighbors questions.''

 '' The FBI,FBI oh hell naw!!!! What the hell do you think they look like. That is not there job that is your FUCKING JOB SO I ADVISE YOU TO GET YOUR REAR END DOWNSTAIRS TO SOLVE THIS MOTHERFUCKING CASE!!!!!!!!!!!''

Charlies POV

Oh my god. I cant see I cant even move. Am i moving. I finally open my eyes in disspair its pitch black. I feel something moist... I feel wet. I come to the relization I was buried alived in my own coffin. with sorts of things. Things that are unexplanable. There are two other bodies in this coffin. Why is this happening to me why cant it be my next door neighbor. Why does it have to be me.. What was those two burglars looking in my house... I cant be thinking about this right now I have to try and get out of this coffin with these two nasty dead bodies.. I can feel that im not that deep in the ground. I push up on the door of the caffin and notice that there is people holding down the coffin door. I managed to get my leg out of the wierd position i was put in. I kicked the coffin door as hard as i could and miracly the two people that were holding down the coffin door let go and fell on the floor. I quickly go the two dead bodies out of my way and i jumped out of that coffin and ran for my life.  

Text: Angel Ortiz
Editing: Angel Ortiz
Publication Date: 06-12-2012

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