My friend, kouen.ninja, and I, are working together on a new story, with the working title of "Hidden Life." It's set in the 31st century, and it's about about a couple of girls, twins in fact: an abused slave named Lily Whitlow, and a troublemaking orphan named Jasmine Firetongue. In "Hidden Life," they learn about their kinship, their real parents, and a scary secret about themselves: they aren't completely human. Kouen.ninja and I would appreciate your positive criticism

The young woman looked up directly into Mr. Davidsons face. His lips curved to a smile but it did not reach his cold eyes. [...]

Daniella Mason was a happy, energetic child. At ten years old, she was glad just to be with her mom and dad. Then an accident happened that ripped it all apart and left her in a coma for three days. What will happen to her life when she awakens?

This is a love story about the struggles of a young relationship between Drake Orly and Trixie Nor.