author - "Robynn Gabel"
A teenager learns a lesson in giving and receiving
Haunting of the souls lost.
ravaged heart, healing, new found love
A virus from the Black Plague era mutated and created two different diseases. The Preservers were granted longevity, the Vamps, a need for raw blood. One keeps the other in check. It is inconceivable that one could fall in love with the other, yet it happens.
This is the first chapter of a romance novel. The author had edited several times, with the help of friends. Note sentence structure issues and lack of comma use as well and hyphened words.
There is more than one way to meet your soul mate
This is Example Before, after it has been edited professionally. Note the flow, tension, and shorter word count. Grammar, sentence structure and comma use are now correct.
Norse Hearts is a historical romance set in 760 AD, before the wild men of the North made their mark in history by raiding an English monastery at Lindisfarne and became known to the world as Vikings The story opens with Einar, a well-seasoned Viking warrior, begrudgingly following his Jarl’s order to attack and kill the people attending a small church in the little Britain town of Seletun, on the River Ouse. Not finding the riches promised him there, he decides to take a few captives to help
Anna Sanchez, a recent college graduate, has inherited the family cattle ranch. Having promised her mother she would take care of it, she is now faced with a tough choice. She is a city girl, and running a cattle business certainly isn't in her plans. A lot of repairs need to be done and she hires Steve Johnson, a local handyman. Their first encounter leaves them both at a disadvantage. Through the summer's adventures, including a wildlife encounter that turns deadly, and a shadow from her
A teenager learns a lesson in giving and receiving
Haunting of the souls lost.
ravaged heart, healing, new found love
A virus from the Black Plague era mutated and created two different diseases. The Preservers were granted longevity, the Vamps, a need for raw blood. One keeps the other in check. It is inconceivable that one could fall in love with the other, yet it happens.
This is the first chapter of a romance novel. The author had edited several times, with the help of friends. Note sentence structure issues and lack of comma use as well and hyphened words.
There is more than one way to meet your soul mate
This is Example Before, after it has been edited professionally. Note the flow, tension, and shorter word count. Grammar, sentence structure and comma use are now correct.
Norse Hearts is a historical romance set in 760 AD, before the wild men of the North made their mark in history by raiding an English monastery at Lindisfarne and became known to the world as Vikings The story opens with Einar, a well-seasoned Viking warrior, begrudgingly following his Jarl’s order to attack and kill the people attending a small church in the little Britain town of Seletun, on the River Ouse. Not finding the riches promised him there, he decides to take a few captives to help
Anna Sanchez, a recent college graduate, has inherited the family cattle ranch. Having promised her mother she would take care of it, she is now faced with a tough choice. She is a city girl, and running a cattle business certainly isn't in her plans. A lot of repairs need to be done and she hires Steve Johnson, a local handyman. Their first encounter leaves them both at a disadvantage. Through the summer's adventures, including a wildlife encounter that turns deadly, and a shadow from her