Bridge Of Writing (Domination #1) - DeYtH Banger (story read aloud .txt) 📗
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GOD FUCK ALl
- The whole idea of this story is cumshot right in the eyes... that's what I want to see... some sperm inside yours eyes...
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DICKS AFTER ALL AREN"T SO BAD>>> ARE THEY?
Sex is not while you watch porn and jerk off... sex is to fuck real flesh and meat that's sex the other sick freak stuff. Chapter 8 - Guide
How to write?
Writing Guide (Part 1)by DeYtH Banger
1. (Rule)
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Build a character... in the frame of 5 chapters... don't put too much details make him the main character... then somewhere around 5... 6 chapter... try to create a killer... make the killer interesting and mysterious then try to use the kill the first character in this case the conflict is between
Detective (Great... 25 Years)
and
Killer (Who is very familiar with how everything goes in crime scene)
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What more interesting than a fight between too genius creatures...
1. Detective
then
2. Killer
to make it more interesting try to be as mysterious as possible don't be predictable if you don't like the way the whole thing goes... try with new chapter a new direction then wake up... make it a dream... alll what has happen is a dream... but what more vicious than recognizing a dream inside a dream... everything happens... reality is a dream... what happens is just in a dream it has never happen... but never isn't the word which you should use... never is just the beginning... it just starts... first dreams then it starts to strike in the reality... But reality isn't nothing more decagon... dimensions.
Everything gots a corner in this whole story... but as you get closer you pray to don't get somewhere where you shouldn't be...
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2. (Rule)
- This above is the beginning it's like picture inside a picture inside a picture
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Create characters.. .Create "Extra" - this is the people which will die... which will be around...
you can't fly between two characters... you need more audience... make a place which will be interesting to be explored... if you ask me
try with chapters which are more gripping
Chapter 1 - You wish you are Dead
Chapter 2 - Deadly Choice
Chapter 3 - Deadly Decision
Chapter 4 - With Precision
Chapter 5 - Everything Sucks
Chapter 6 - Everything is Nothing
Chapter 7- It's too Late to Say GoodBye
Chapter 8 - Try To Say "GoodBye"
Chapter 9 - Don't Press
Chapter 10 - Don't Think about it
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This is awesome it makes you wonder what's inside each chapter it could also be
Chapter 1 - 11 Victims
Chapter 2 - Dead
Chapter 3 - Being Great Is nOt Enough
(DOn't spoil the content by giving a chapter name which tells everything which is going to happen in this story like
E.G.
Chapter 1 - The Detective Dies
Chapter 2 - Killer IS Caught
(Naaah sucks... we already know what to expect try something like)
Chapter 1 - I wish I am Dead
Chapter 2 - Nothing
Chapter 3 - I was There
Chapter 4 - It's A Lie
Chapter 5 - Take the BUs
Chapter 6 - Bloody Art
Chapter 7 - It's the beginning
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3. (Rule)
- Don't spoil the story by going around the same events over and over and over and over... and trying to ruin somebody's reputation while building other people reputation, reps suck if you gonna make reps just stop writting. Writting is not about reps it's about "ODD". Some authors spoil the story in the middle
"You already know what's going to happen and expect something new... but it stays there" - Opinion
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Kill him... them... all of them... if u don't like the outcome of this whole story create a sequel and kill all of them... one by one... how?
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Just make it silent... and personal... we are not amateurs.
by DeYtH Banger
4. (Rule)
- You should see the whole image
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If you are writting a story about erotic kills try to see the position of the bitch and how the cock is around her and a guy is trying to rape her and how she see the all thing and also try to see and the killer position.
- Why does he starts that?
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How he does
WHat he does
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Who is he?
What's his name?
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Is that his first victim?
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You can see great examples inside my stories
1. It's Not A Happy (Great Killer...)
2. One The Record
3. A Letter Send to: (A Letter from a killer)
4. The BBB (I am sorry, but that's how everything started)
5. 1960's (Kill YOurself)
6. 1960's (Part 2) (Try It)
7. TimeZane (Part 1) (Did you Saw it comming?)
8. TimeZane (Part 2) (Words aren't enough)
(Note: It means that if there is a cock which is going to cum in her eyes you should be in her position and too see how it's going to go... where?... Why there?... ask yourself this questions and try by using the answers building up something. IF you can't make something today ... put it for tomorrow... probably you are going to get motivation tomorrow. If you are the killer try to experience the art... what will the killer have
1.60 - Heigh?
60 Weight?
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With A Glock
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(Bang.. .bang... - Just typical crimescience the killer is in rage and knows the victim or probably is because of stereotype if we look closer he kills people which look almost the same... probably this has been a girlfriend which has left him and now he seeks for revenge... or what?... Or what?
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This here is a Criminal Minds Profile... why you don't try to build up one?)
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With a knife
(Slash... slash... slash... - Bam Bam the art of killing)
5. (Rule)
- Research is important... if I want to make a rape case... I need pornography... First to feel the pleasure of sex and how it reflects mind... then as a second stage I start watching Series like
"Dark Minds" - Documentary
"Criminal Minds" - TV Series
"Elementary" - TV Series
"Obsession: Dark Desires"
"House of Horror: Kidnapped"
"American Ripper"
- The whole idea is to feel now how is the feeling to kill
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third stage what we need to get there?
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Alcohol and drugs can do the work... they say something small and it gets bigger anda the guy whoo is on too much alcohol or on too much drugs just... SNAPS
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But why we don' make it more complex... the gets angry or jelous... jelousy is awesome and it doesn't need somebody to be on drugs or alchol to feel it.
and snaps
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Or some people just decline to take him at work because he is already bein in prison... - TOO MUCH?
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Being suspicious could do that think making the detective thinks that this suspicious guy is the killer and boom... few chapters... thinking that they are on the right guy but they are following a wrong person... - How awesome is that?
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It's like life!
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Diseases
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Phobias are awesome things if u use them in right way you can make a hell of a good novel.
Books - Extra Literature
Books (Part 1)1. The DUFF: Designated Ugly Fat Friend by Kody Keplinger
4 stars out of 5
My Opinion:
"September 21, 2017 –
60.0% "In your place I will "kill myself"."
September 21, 2017 –
50.0% "1:15:14"
September 21, 2017 –
30.0% "44:57"
September 20, 2017 – Started Reading"
P.S.: Always curious how everything happens
2. The Eleventh Victim by Nancy Grace
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
"September 20, 2017 –
70.0% "Nice... nice... nice
1:12:00"
September 20, 2017 –
50.0% "59:20"
September 20, 2017 –
20.0% "This guy sends chills up to the spine.
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This killer is so vicious and smart and geneious
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GREAT, great work... just congrats for the author."
September 20, 2017 –
10.0% "21:55"
September 20, 2017 – Started Reading"
- One moment +1 star other moments -1 star it's difficult to judge such a brilliant work... but to be honest here I really enjoyed this work and I can't wait to start and to read and the other books which are part of the series.
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In my opinion such author like Nancy Grace is rare and if you see such try to appreacite the whole thing.
3. Rape: A Love Story by Joyce Carol Oates
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
"September 20, 2017 –
70.0% "Who da fack are you to make such promises?"
September 20, 2017 –
60.0% "1:11:40"
September 20, 2017 –
50.0% "1:00:18
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A image full of agony and anger... one simple rape could cost so much."
September 20, 2017 – Started Reading"
4. Blue Genes by Val McDermid
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
The whole thing is just don't think... that's all... DON"T GIVE A SHIT!
5. The Punch
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